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Hello everyone. I've recently taken a liking to erotic literature, but I'm very picky with it so I decided to try to write a short story.
The story is more focused on the act itself rather than the setting, so keep that in mind.
Again, this is the first thing I've ever written and I would like honest feedback, whether it be related to character, setting, narrative, grammar, detail, descriptions... I think you get it.
Seriously, I know it is not very great, so by being honest you're only helping me.
Thank you in advance for your help, and I hope you enjoy.
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She yawns. You look over your shoulder to see her lying on the bed on top of her stomach, feet up in the hair and hands supporting her head. She has been quietly watching you work on your computer for about one hour now. She is absolutely beautiful.
She is a tall girl, about 1.80 meters. Deep, brown eyes and dark red, straight long hair which, had her been standing, would reach to about the level of her nipples. She has a very attractive, slender build and her breasts are small and cute. Her skin is very white.
Today she's wearing your favorite lingerie, a blue set with fancy floral patters: a pair of pantyhose with straps that link them to her panties which were decorated with a little bow on the front, and a bra which is pretty tight to her breasts. One would think this was a special occasion, but it was not. She always said she felt comfortable wearing them, and since you always liked it so much she was happy to wear it whenever you two were alone.
She notices you looking at her.
"Are you done for today?" – She asks, smiling at you.
"I'm getting a bit tired." – you reply nodding your head affirmatively.
"Wanna play a little?"
"I don't know if I can keep up, it has been a long day." – You feel a bit bad for denying her, but you really worked a lot today.
She gets up and moves over to you, sitting on your lap and putting a hand on your face.
"Well, lets find out."
Without hesitation she leans her head against you, making your lips meet hers. She has always been a great kisser and your tongues move around, tasting and holding each other as she wraps her hands around your head softly. She raises her right leg, moving it to the other side of you so she can be facing you directly. She leaves your mouth and looks down at the clear bump in your shorts.
"Looks like someone is willing after all." – She says, moving one hand to feel your member trough you clothes.
You look down and you see her panties are getting very wet, so you wrap your arms around her waist and pull her to you, so that you can help her using your bulge. She gasps and returns the grip, wrapping her arms around your neck and resuming the passionate kiss. Her breasts now rub against you as she sways her hips back and forth to try and get the most out of the situation. Suddenly she stops kissing you and rests her head on your shoulder. She starts breathing a little more intensely, and moving her hips more violently.
"F-fuck" – she says quietly, so quietly you are not sure if you heard it well.
"What did you say?"
She moves her head and whispers into vivthomas lesbian your ear:
"Fuck me. Now."
She moved a bit back, loosening her grip on you to give you some space to work. You quickly and somewhat clumsily expose your erect penis by partially lowering your shorts. She quickly grabs it and gives it a few strokes, you can almost feel a "Finally!" from her move. You could clearly see the look of pure desire on her face, like an animal who hasn't been fed for days. She looked at it hungrily, and started grinding her crotch on it as she stroked it. She seems to be having fun, but you are not sure how longer you can take this. Suddenly she looks up at your eyes, completely stopping what she is doing.
"Sorry..."
She grabs your head to give you a last, quick kiss on the lips, and then she positions herself over your cock, pulling her panties to the side to expose her wet entrance. She wraps an arm around your neck and slowly comes down, sliding your cock into her depths. She gasps and holds her breath as your shaft penetrates her like she wants to fully concentrate on the feeling. Finally she rests again on your lap, fully impaled by your rock hard cock, and you see her close her eyes and let out a strong sigh, as she shivers lightly.
She once again wraps her arms around you and rests her head next to yours, as she lightly shakes her hips back and forth. You take this opportunity to slowly move your hands up her back, and undo her bra. Once it is out of the way, she stops swaying and leans back, letting you take a viv thomas the art of sex good look at her beautiful breasts.
She never liked her breasts. She always thought they were small, and she always thought you felt the same, even tho you let her know how much you love them at each opportunity you get.
You grab one of her breasts and start fondling it, making circular motions with your thumb around her small nipple. She is just looking at the void as you do this, just taking all these feelings in as her breathing gets stronger and faster. You then lean forward and start using your mouth, sucking lightly and playing with her hard nipple. She resumes her rocking and starts moaning very faintly. You think it is time to give her what she wants now.
Your hands run down her body, down to her thighs which you squeeze and stroke. Her skin is so soft and pleasant, and soon you feel your partner shiver lightly once again.
"Please!" – She pleads.
You move your hands back to rest in her ass. You lock eyes with her and she knows what's comming. She closes her eyes and once again leans against you, resting her weight against your torso , and pressing her beautiful breasts and hard nipples against your chest.
You start lifting her up into the air slowly, as she lets out a moan which is more audible this time. once only the head of your cock is inside her she holds her breath again. You guide her down onto your lap again, and this time she reacts much more violently, letting a short scream and tightening the grip around your neck. You do nella viv thomas art of sex viv thomas it again, and again, very slowly every time to make sure you both feel every inch of your cock rubbing against her walls. Her moans are getting quite frequent and loud now. She moves her head in front of yours and starts kissing you in the lips again. You keep going, this time picking up the pace a bit more, and suddenly she starts whimpering loudly and trembling uncontrollably. You keep going, but you start feeling her vagina contract around your dick more and more with each penetration. You cannot hold it anymore, the feeling of her pussy and her amazing kiss are too much, and you guide her down one last time before you ejaculate, filling her womb with your hot seed, as your partner now calms down and starts moaning quietly and faintly again. You finally stop kissing her, thinking that, if it weren't for that kiss this would've been a rather loud scene, and she rests her head once again on your shoulder, smiling and sighing a faint "Thank you". You hold her in your arms.
You're very tired after this, but you don't want to disrupt the moment. You end up falling asleep, holding each other, with you still inside her, your last thought being that you forgot to wear a condom during all this, but you're too tired to think about it now. It is probably fine.
FundleMc
The story is more focused on the act itself rather than the setting, so keep that in mind.
Again, this is the first thing I've ever written and I would like honest feedback, whether it be related to character, setting, narrative, grammar, detail, descriptions... I think you get it.
Seriously, I know it is not very great, so by being honest you're only helping me.
Thank you in advance for your help, and I hope you enjoy.
—–>
—–>
—–>
She yawns. You look over your shoulder to see her lying on the bed on top of her stomach, feet up in the hair and hands supporting her head. She has been quietly watching you work on your computer for about one hour now. She is absolutely beautiful.
She is a tall girl, about 1.80 meters. Deep, brown eyes and dark red, straight long hair which, had her been standing, would reach to about the level of her nipples. She has a very attractive, slender build and her breasts are small and cute. Her skin is very white.
Today she's wearing your favorite lingerie, a blue set with fancy floral patters: a pair of pantyhose with straps that link them to her panties which were decorated with a little bow on the front, and a bra which is pretty tight to her breasts. One would think this was a special occasion, but it was not. She always said she felt comfortable wearing them, and since you always liked it so much she was happy to wear it whenever you two were alone.
She notices you looking at her.
"Are you done for today?" – She asks, smiling at you.
"I'm getting a bit tired." – you reply nodding your head affirmatively.
"Wanna play a little?"
"I don't know if I can keep up, it has been a long day." – You feel a bit bad for denying her, but you really worked a lot today.
She gets up and moves over to you, sitting on your lap and putting a hand on your face.
"Well, lets find out."
Without hesitation she leans her head against you, making your lips meet hers. She has always been a great kisser and your tongues move around, tasting and holding each other as she wraps her hands around your head softly. She raises her right leg, moving it to the other side of you so she can be facing you directly. She leaves your mouth and looks down at the clear bump in your shorts.
"Looks like someone is willing after all." – She says, moving one hand to feel your member trough you clothes.
You look down and you see her panties are getting very wet, so you wrap your arms around her waist and pull her to you, so that you can help her using your bulge. She gasps and returns the grip, wrapping her arms around your neck and resuming the passionate kiss. Her breasts now rub against you as she sways her hips back and forth to try and get the most out of the situation. Suddenly she stops kissing you and rests her head on your shoulder. She starts breathing a little more intensely, and moving her hips more violently.
"F-fuck" – she says quietly, so quietly you are not sure if you heard it well.
"What did you say?"
She moves her head and whispers into vivthomas lesbian your ear:
"Fuck me. Now."
She moved a bit back, loosening her grip on you to give you some space to work. You quickly and somewhat clumsily expose your erect penis by partially lowering your shorts. She quickly grabs it and gives it a few strokes, you can almost feel a "Finally!" from her move. You could clearly see the look of pure desire on her face, like an animal who hasn't been fed for days. She looked at it hungrily, and started grinding her crotch on it as she stroked it. She seems to be having fun, but you are not sure how longer you can take this. Suddenly she looks up at your eyes, completely stopping what she is doing.
"Sorry..."
She grabs your head to give you a last, quick kiss on the lips, and then she positions herself over your cock, pulling her panties to the side to expose her wet entrance. She wraps an arm around your neck and slowly comes down, sliding your cock into her depths. She gasps and holds her breath as your shaft penetrates her like she wants to fully concentrate on the feeling. Finally she rests again on your lap, fully impaled by your rock hard cock, and you see her close her eyes and let out a strong sigh, as she shivers lightly.
She once again wraps her arms around you and rests her head next to yours, as she lightly shakes her hips back and forth. You take this opportunity to slowly move your hands up her back, and undo her bra. Once it is out of the way, she stops swaying and leans back, letting you take a viv thomas the art of sex good look at her beautiful breasts.
She never liked her breasts. She always thought they were small, and she always thought you felt the same, even tho you let her know how much you love them at each opportunity you get.
You grab one of her breasts and start fondling it, making circular motions with your thumb around her small nipple. She is just looking at the void as you do this, just taking all these feelings in as her breathing gets stronger and faster. You then lean forward and start using your mouth, sucking lightly and playing with her hard nipple. She resumes her rocking and starts moaning very faintly. You think it is time to give her what she wants now.
Your hands run down her body, down to her thighs which you squeeze and stroke. Her skin is so soft and pleasant, and soon you feel your partner shiver lightly once again.
"Please!" – She pleads.
You move your hands back to rest in her ass. You lock eyes with her and she knows what's comming. She closes her eyes and once again leans against you, resting her weight against your torso , and pressing her beautiful breasts and hard nipples against your chest.
You start lifting her up into the air slowly, as she lets out a moan which is more audible this time. once only the head of your cock is inside her she holds her breath again. You guide her down onto your lap again, and this time she reacts much more violently, letting a short scream and tightening the grip around your neck. You do nella viv thomas art of sex viv thomas it again, and again, very slowly every time to make sure you both feel every inch of your cock rubbing against her walls. Her moans are getting quite frequent and loud now. She moves her head in front of yours and starts kissing you in the lips again. You keep going, this time picking up the pace a bit more, and suddenly she starts whimpering loudly and trembling uncontrollably. You keep going, but you start feeling her vagina contract around your dick more and more with each penetration. You cannot hold it anymore, the feeling of her pussy and her amazing kiss are too much, and you guide her down one last time before you ejaculate, filling her womb with your hot seed, as your partner now calms down and starts moaning quietly and faintly again. You finally stop kissing her, thinking that, if it weren't for that kiss this would've been a rather loud scene, and she rests her head once again on your shoulder, smiling and sighing a faint "Thank you". You hold her in your arms.
You're very tired after this, but you don't want to disrupt the moment. You end up falling asleep, holding each other, with you still inside her, your last thought being that you forgot to wear a condom during all this, but you're too tired to think about it now. It is probably fine.
FundleMc